TalesOFaMadman

Thanks for the advice I'll fix the grammar. Also you might need to wait awhile since I'm a beginner at writing. The other thing I'm adding more to this chapter ...

Thank you for the review. I clicked on your links and they were really helpful. The showing in writing I have to work on that one. Also can you review ...

Thanks for the advice. I'll fix it because yea it's too short for a chapter. I'm still learning because this is my first piece that I posted.