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thank you for the reviews! The change of tense in the middle is for the reason of a kind of flashback! I looked in my grammar book and it said ...

Please see that either character could be either gender and their relationship could be anything, really. So please tell me what you thought the each were and what their relationship ...

thank you, griffinkeeper! Very much appriciated!

I agree with Emma! This is really good! I really really liked it! I don't know why more people aren't reading it! Grace is a really neat charcter and I ...

I double posted this so I'm bringing a comment from the other one here so I can delete that one! From syte: "Quote: she asked simply, keeping her chocolate eyes ...

thanks for the comments! Pinata, you'll see later on how it's more action :) the mind thing and diamante are the only Scifi... that's why I put it in the ...

thanks so much for the advice and helping me with ideas! I'll change the title, I promise but I think I need help with ideas! If you have any ideas ...

Thanks so much! It really helped! I revised it and even changed the burglary into a hostage! Again, thanks!

Okay, these are a few questions that I want reviewsers to answer (please): 1) Is the way I did the personification fit well? 2) Did know from the context right ...

Wow. I really really liked this. "Try walking in her shoes for a day" is one of my favorite phrases and this is what that phrase really means! It's wonderful! ...