Lustra - Draft 1 Part 1
Excerpts from the first draft of the first part of the story im working on piece by piece. I've already begun a second draft vastly different and much revised but I would appreciate feedback on what's there for what works and what does not. This draft was written a few years ago in this world's early days of creation, so bear with it please.
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Sc 1
NOTE: This is not the entire chapter as it was written. I will be posting the part in scenes while I rework those scenes or elements in the 2nd draft.