TSun

I...I feel green today. Not the fresh, new-life spring green But a faded, yellowish green. The green of a dying plant. The green of this dying plant, Here in the ...

As some people have pointed out before me, this seems to belong more in fiction than in poetry. Perhaps I'm wrong. Well i also have to get this off my ...

Very powerful. I like the last lines, about freedom of speech and the right to remain silent. In fact, you're too good. You are making me feel bad about my ...

I actually really enjoy this! The goodness comes from the simple (yet complex) lines. No need to feel confused about something like this if you've never done it before, which ...

No problem! Don't worry about it, we all do stuff like that. I've been around here for a while now and I still don't know what I'm doing much of ...

Most people think that poetry is free-flowing words, pouring out like water from an urn. Really, nothing could be further from the truth. Poetry has rules and if you break ...

Hey, TSun! Maybe this is forbidden or unethical, but I'm sure a mod will correct me if it is... You're supposed to review at least two works before you post ...

Welcome TSun TSun (Verse 1) Democracy, capitalism and freedom of speech, hidden behind their promises, who's the leech? one size fits all schools, what is education? knowledge I seek is ...

simple and to the point pure dimes!

please take this as constructive criticism : if you want to make it rhyme, then take time to make sure it flows and makes sense use a more elaborate rhyme ...

comments plz!

Hello, before I begin there is just something I have to get off my chest. I have a little pet-peeve about people not capitalizing the letter “I” and you seem ...

something that is worth expanding on good job!

simple and to the point, good stuff that i like but not something that i would write

***i struggled at which section this would belong to, but decided it told a story more than being a song Night TSun TSun (Verse 1) Tired, i quickly crossed the ...