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Re: Delusion of Persecution
Right, TSun, your response is immature and childish. I'm not a great writer, but this is the opinion of a reader who happens to critique, and if I'm not interested, ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Delusion of Persecution
Hello TSun. Blinkster here. Cynic alert. Again, I awoke to the diced sunshine plastered on to my ceiling. But now, it wasn't to the sound of the birds, or the ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Delusion of Persecution
Again, I awoke to the diced sunshine plastered on to my ceiling. But now, it wasn't to the sound of the birds, or the rare bee that comes buzzing at ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Flying like an Angel
You seem like someone who enjoys freedom, no? Or perhaps your poem may have been your minds attempt to be free? The poem itself flows somewhat, although some lines may ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Ink Bottle
thanks you all =) really appreciated.
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Ink Bottle
(Chorus) x2 Ink scribbles across my page, through time and wisdom I've become a sage. (Paper and pen, to rewrite history when...) TSun (Verse 2) That deafening echo, is the ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Eternal - TSun (Part 1)
***If this receives good reviews, then I will post part 2 Eternal TSun TSun (Verse 1) Remember? That one night you lost your mind? Shattered in many pieces,they were hard ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Descending - TSun
Wow. Ok I'm having a serious sense of AWESOMENESS. Haha ok that sounded like such a teenage girl thing to say... But what else did you expect? The only thing ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Descending - TSun
Descending TSun TSun (Verse 1) Why should we put our faith in hypocrisy? If they don't practice what they preach, then this isn't the truth we seek. Why do some ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Again - TSun
Thanks so much for clearing that up for me! :D And thank you, too, for being so sweet and kind about it; you'd make a fine teacher--just ask your friends ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Again - TSun
Again *I don't get the title.* TSun *If this is your pen name, it doesn't need to be here... or below, either.* if i want my pen name to be ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Night - TSun
For starters, I really, REALLY love this peice It takes everyday things that we all have to deal with and puts it all into context Personally, I love the deepness ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Again - TSun
BFG wrote: No problem! Don't worry about it, we all do stuff like that. I've been around here for a while now and I still don't know what I'm doing ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: um ... Just don't smear me Ok?
Quote: moaning wind on full-moon night fear in my heart and blood in my sight This seems...forced. I'm not sure why. Also, it's kind of a sudden contrast from those ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Welcome - TSun
TOTALY AGREE!!!!! Have you seen that poster that says: CENCORSHIP HAS BEEN FOUND TO CAUSE BLINDNESS IN CHILDREN.? Any way... you should talk to me the next time you're online. ...
Feb 1, 2009
