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You guys are all dissing the way I set it out - which is fair enough, it is very hard to read. But there was certain reasoning for it to ...

Hey thanks for all that you two :) It does get a lot clearer in the later chapters. The whole point of the first parts is that there are many ...

Simon I As I walked into the room, all was quiet. I made my way in slowly analyzing my surroundings. The students were avoiding eye contact with me and their ...

Hey there. Woah, this poem blew me away. I'm so glad to have joined a website with so many talented writers! Something is knocking the window - it's just a ...

Hey there. Good read (: Now this is going to sound VERY picky, but that's just me. I noticed you used the word 'uneasy' twice. I think in a short ...

Thanks Mr. Monument - You didn't seem to grasp the idea of the whole 'miracle' ending. That to me says that I didn't do my job as a writer. What's ...

Thanks Nixie. Yeah I understand what you're saying. It's more of a free verse poem, where there's not set stanzas or proper structure. Creativity without limits or boundaries I like ...

Woah. I know I'm supposed to give some sort of constructive criticism for this, but I don't want too! This was so amazing, particularly for the writing of just a ...

Thanks for the info Meep (: I love writing poetry, although a lot of my poetry is just free verse (is that just cheating :P) I tend to stick to ...

Once upon a moment; the two existed in total harmony. The love swirled around them like dolphins dancing. Warm days of extravagant enchantment, cool nights of excruciating pleasure. They were ...

Memories: brilliant things. Stories, kept locked away in tiny little suitcases in the bottom of your pocket. Every now and then, you reach into your pocket and pull out one ...

Awh this poem was so good to read! It was so light hearted and fun! Reminds me a lot of something Dr. Suess would write! Would make an excellent children's ...

Now now, I do not wish to be harsh...but perhaps this poem is a little cliche? To me, this poem reminds me of something I would have been writing a ...

This poem was beautiful. It really made me think and more than anything feel. It would be great if you could draw on this idea and perhaps create something a ...

Hi everyone, So glad I've found this site! It took me decades (not literally) to find a good young writers website and looks like I've finally found it. I can't ...