TJEvans

Thank you, cjscoot. I have taken what you have said under advisement, fixed some to your review, and left some how I had originally written it. Thank you very much ...

Mm, yes, I find I do finally lose all discontent with this poem after switching it. The internal rhyme makes it just as memorable line as any other, which is ...

Ah, yes. I'm quite thankful for the extensive review. Before I posted it up here, nearly every response to it was one of exclamation with no criticism. I think part ...