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Re: The Flowers Have Seams
Thank you for all your reviews! I will be sure to fix it up and maybe even write more branching off of this. =]
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: The Flowers Have Seams
um i didnt really know where to put this, soo i put it here haha. i havnt posted on here in a really really long time, and this is kinda ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: The Night Stalker
ok, I was inspired to write this poem because I had seen a biography about Richard Ramirez, also known as "The Night Stalker" he was a real killer and I ...
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Burns of the Worst Degree
OK, first of all i like this song, very catchy!! but there's just a few things I'm a bit confused about. just that you use the symbolism of a bridge ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Rousseau's Academy for Vampire Hunters
Mandy "well.... i guess Ive kept you long enough" i said to the girl with the wolf. her wolf was getting mad, very mad. it did not like me at ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Rousseau's Academy for Vampire Hunters
mandy "hello" i said to the girl as she opened the door. i had been hunting with fai when i saw her. she was walking with her dog, but no ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: The Darkness
thanks!!! yay im glad someone read it. i get what your saying about the being to broud, i will keep that in mind next time. thanks =]
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: The Darkness
this is my first thing posted, let me know what you think, good and bad There is no more That she can feel All there is is hurt This just ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Rousseau's Academy for Vampire Hunters
Mandy "mmm i could go for something to eat" i said walking next to Fai. i hadn't had a chance to eat this morning due to a broken alarm clock. ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Rousseau's Academy for Vampire Hunters
Name: Mandy Age (13-25, older for vampires): 16 (the age she will always be, she stoped keeping track in realy years) Gender: Girl Race (Human, werewolf, vampire, etc.):Vampire Skills: Can ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Rousseau's Academy for Vampire Hunters
i call last free space!! will post profile later. =]
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: With Eyes Alone
this poem is akin to stop and go traffic. I cannot tell you how difficult reading this poem is because I keep feeling like I'm jerked around so that the ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Hurt
I feel you brought out the emotion of this poem very well. I definitely liked it. i could feel the pain within the words, though i do think that if ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Forgive and Forget
I liked this poem very much. There i a very strong message in it. you don't say a lot about it and you don't really describe it in depth but ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Of A Rose
I really liked this poem. A rose is always such a great topic for poetry. I loved how you showed both sides of the rose and I could picture the ...
Jun 27, 2010
