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TAYLORBETH

  • General Articles Re: Lilacs & Mason Jars

    I used a writing prompt for this and I want to know what you guys think of it. I know it's rather lengthy but I need feedback! I'm not asking ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Right (write) on.

    Have you ever been so comfortable that you almost feel un comfortable? Cliche phrases and thoughts are too often overlooked or unexplored, because they're just that...cliche. They are ignored because ...

    Nov 20, 2009
  • General Articles Re: A Tribute to Michael Jackson

    Kara, thank you for spreading Michael's love a little further. Give your classmates a break, though; you, too, thought Michael was a "bad person" once upon a time. Perhaps you ...

    Nov 20, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Root Beer Float

    I love the line where you say his freckles were sprinkled like cinnamon across his cheeks. So cute. :)

    Nov 20, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hello World

    Thanks, Amy. "September nine" in the first stanza is actually my day of birth. I was born two weeks after my delivery date. That's why I added the frankincense and ...

    Nov 20, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hello World

    Earlier this morning I escaped; it’s September nine, I am one week late, but arrived on my own time. Seriously, my mom is crying. Look at her! And what the ...

    Nov 20, 2009
  • General Articles Re: yes, Mother.

    Everywhere I search, they all say, "Write every day." Write about the first person/place/abstract/thought/idea/animal/object/word that burrows into your system. Actually, don't wait for it to burrow;

    Nov 20, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Anti-bullying

    This is a very touchy subject, you are brave for covering it. I do think you used too many questions.. why not alternate with some declaration in between? Elaborate a ...

    Nov 20, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Legos

    Dangit, huh?! This reminds me of when I was much younger, and there always seemed to be a little brother or sister's foot directly in the middle of whatever masterpiece ...

    Nov 20, 2009


The human heart has hidden treasures, in secret kept, in silence sealed...
— Charlotte Bronte