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:) Hahah. He's allergic to my favorite food ever! Mushrooms are fantastic, dude. Anyway, I thought this was waaaaayyyy too tell-y. Get what I'm saying? It's all really well done, ...

How come you always get the best reviews ever? Ugh. No one ever critiques me. Anyway, best part so far! I am in love with this story! It rocks my ...

Haha! I think this is the best part of the whole journal! I finished off the night with a thriller movie and large bowl of ice cream, ‘cause frankly, I ...

Hey, Jared! I haven't been on here for so long... but you brought this to school a while back and so I thought I'd comment on it. You already know ...

I A beam of light pierced my eyes and I was flying. No, not flying. I was being lifted into the mist . My heart hammered against my chest; my ...

I know that I'm still working on Stars , but after reading a few Sci-Fi stories on here, I've been intrigued to do one. So here it is. This is ...

This is called writer's block. It's no fun. Believe me. Steps to take it away: - Take a long, hot shower. - Take a nap. - Don't think about your ...

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Wow. This was really different. Unlike anything I've ever read on this site - or in the world. Cool! I don't really understand the actual meaning of them poem. It's ...

Hey! I owe you a critique! I thought that it was pretty good - but echoing the others - I couldn't understand what it was you were trying to make ...

Why post it if it has no meaning? I think we post things on here to get critques so we can help you become a better author. If you're not ...

Hey! I owe you a critique, so here I am! Lifting the quill he stared at the parchment sighing with all out hopelessness. Holding his buckets of tears that threatened ...

You have a lot of critiques, so sorry if I repeat anything! This was a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed it. It was just... so brilliantly crafted! It wasn’t the ...

Hey! I owe you a critique! At 7 o’clock, he was standing at the lift, waiting for it to reach floor 17. Always write out the numbers. (seven o'clock) (floor ...

Thank you all so much! Ink_On_Fire: Thank you! I was thinking that this poem would be a disaster! Thanks for your kind words. I owe you one critique now! Thanks. ...