Sythe

My brother has wanted me to write this for him. He came up with the idea and I've been writing it. I think it's coming along pretty good. The ending ...

Okay, sorry for double posting, but I got the same box come up. Just wanted to tell you.

I have default, cause it's blue and stuff. I'll go and visit a locked topic and see if I get it again.

I am using Mozilla Firefox, but it happens when I'm on IE also. Whenever I go to a topic that is locked, a little box pops up and says, "Text ...

“After having Stayed in this position some short time we proceeded and by the time we were Clear of the Wood all the fireing and the Indians and Roialists were ...

Hey! I'm working on a new short story, and this is the first part of Abductions . I would love you to rip it apart! :Sythe:

O.o Holy freak, girl. Haha. Thank you! But, would you mind editing out all of those !!!!? It expanded my page, and I dont' like that. Thanks, though.

So, Sythe, about that part "Shell I'm just an empty shell Why not go to hell?" I know the rhyming really sucks, but I wrote that to connect to Edward ...

I agree with Aedomir. This wasn't very good at all. It was meant as an April Fool's joke, no? Well... I thought it wasn't very funny at all. In fact... ...

Hey, there! I owe you a critique! Okay, I'm going to be honest here. I really didn't like this poem. It just didn't work. It probably didn't work for you, ...

Bear >> Thank you so much! Your kind words have inspired me to write more, which I will. You change characters at the end, no? It's confusing for a minute. ...

Sounds like a horrible nightmare that only gets worse as it goes on. Abductions

:shock: Uh... Wow? Dude, that was amazing! I was hooked to my seat the entire ride! Man, that was sooo cool! Oh.. wow. Gosh, that was so awesome. Okay, now ...

Hey! That was really awesome! I really liked it! I've read New Moon and thought it was the best out of the three. This song really hits the spot that ...

I would very much appreciate a critique on Abductions . Thank you so much! :Sythe: