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Re: The Silencer (1)
My brother has wanted me to write this for him. He came up with the idea and I've been writing it. I think it's coming along pretty good. The ending ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Okay, sorry for double posting, but I got the same box come up. Just wanted to tell you.
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I have default, cause it's blue and stuff. I'll go and visit a locked topic and see if I get it again.
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I am using Mozilla Firefox, but it happens when I'm on IE also. Whenever I go to a topic that is locked, a little box pops up and says, "Text ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: A Shiny Reddish Colour (Edited 6/3)
“After having Stayed in this position some short time we proceeded and by the time we were Clear of the Wood all the fireing and the Indians and Roialists were ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Critiques like blades, cutting up (yeah, yeah) your story!
Hey! I'm working on a new short story, and this is the first part of Abductions . I would love you to rip it apart! :Sythe:
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Abductions
O.o Holy freak, girl. Haha. Thank you! But, would you mind editing out all of those !!!!? It expanded my page, and I dont' like that. Thanks, though.
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Formerly Heroine
So, Sythe, about that part "Shell I'm just an empty shell Why not go to hell?" I know the rhyming really sucks, but I wrote that to connect to Edward ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Some other time honey (April Fools!)
I agree with Aedomir. This wasn't very good at all. It was meant as an April Fool's joke, no? Well... I thought it wasn't very funny at all. In fact... ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Jack Frost (Winter)
Hey, there! I owe you a critique! Okay, I'm going to be honest here. I really didn't like this poem. It just didn't work. It probably didn't work for you, ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Abductions
Bear >> Thank you so much! Your kind words have inspired me to write more, which I will. You change characters at the end, no? It's confusing for a minute. ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds like a horrible nightmare that only gets worse as it goes on. Abductions
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Werewolf's Bride
:shock: Uh... Wow? Dude, that was amazing! I was hooked to my seat the entire ride! Man, that was sooo cool! Oh.. wow. Gosh, that was so awesome. Okay, now ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Formerly Heroine
Hey! That was really awesome! I really liked it! I've read New Moon and thought it was the best out of the three. This song really hits the spot that ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Poor Imp's Poor House - Poor No More
I would very much appreciate a critique on Abductions . Thank you so much! :Sythe:
May 25, 2008
