Syte

Yeah, the ending got a little abstract. I didn't completely follow it at the end. Perhaps if I think about it a little I'll understand. Anyway, I was very intrigued ...

It seems very lighthearted. Probably could make a good children's book, from what I read. But they're right, it is cliched. Find a way to twist the cliches. The cliches ...

I'd continue writing if I were you. Robots VS Humans is nothing new, but you it may possible to make the story interesting without overusing cliches. I don't know all ...