SylvanusGrace

LMS VII - Week 14 (September 14-20, 2026); Word count: 1036 words Raindrops were sliding down her cheeks and she felt movement of every raindrop. Their journey ended at the ...

LMS VII - Week 13 (September 7-13, 2026); Word count: 1022 words II. Heavy raindrops fell on the rocks that were rising along the way. They slid down and soaked ...

LMS VII - Week 12 (August 31 - September 6, 2026); Word count: 1231 words She wished inside her heart his well-being. Her being was reaching inside the connection. There ...

LMS VII - Week 11 (August 24-30, 2026); Word count: 1059 words Warmness was also present inside the radiating comfort that was with both of them. Their hearts and spirits ...

Hi again! Congrats on making it to week 10! The idea of a dagger made out of soil (several parts ago) is really interesting and highlights the focus on earth/nature ...

LMS VII - Week 10 (August 17-23, 2026); Word count: 1096 words Touch your left arm. He tried to resist the instruction as he moved forward while reaching for the ...

LMS VII - Week 9 (August 10-16, 2026); Word count: 1030 words You cannot connect with me. Look deep inside yourself, and you’ll know that I’m telling you the truth. ...

LMS VII - Week 8 (August 3-9, 2026); Word count: 1031 words His slow steps moved forward as he tried to approach the animals that were before him. I’m feeling ...

LMS VII - Week 7 (July 27 - August 2, 2026); Word count: 1085 words There was a certain graveness that was inside them. That night both of them were ...

LMS VII - Week 6 (July 20-26, 2026); Word count: 1121 words The connection, her outpour of strength, all these marvelous things had happened and, after that, she could not ...

LMS VII - Week 5 (July 13-19, 2026); Word count: 1027 words We will survive somehow... You are in danger... You must warn the other Verontos... These words she understood ...

LMS VII - Week 4 (July 6-12, 2026); Word count: 1097 words Touch the soil beneath you , the inner voice instructed Verontos, which he obediently followed. He put his ...

LMS VII - Week 3 (June 29 - July 5, 2026); Word count: 1057 words His symbol radiated pain through his body. I must move forward, I must do what ...

Hi there! Oh these excerpts are super interesting. The narrative voice feels unique, and I like the idea of the stream and the forest being named characters. Best of luck ...

LMS VII - Week 2 (June 22-28, 2026); Word count: 1145 words The stream was making a pleasant gurgling noise, and it was going forward on its course. He saw ...