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Thanks!

I changed it to "carved" instead of wrote, and I'm not sure where to put the 3rd line. But thanks!

That was kind of intentional. And I'll try to oomph it up a bit too. Thanks!

Thanks!

Omg you changed your name

Thank you!

Thanks!

Ah. I can't wait to read it!

Thanks for the review! And, I too, feel the same way about blood. It's weird isn't it? I'll try to add in some emotion as well.

SUCCESS! :P

That's what I mean. But my lipstick is physically gooey :)

My lipstick usually is. Well technically it's lip butter

I probably will split it into stanzas, thanks for the idea! But about the spilt tea and lipstick, I didn't mean that those examples were gooey feelings. Spilt tea is ...

I wanted people to feel warm and happy while reading it, and Im glad you liked it and laughed! Thanks!!

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