SwiftShadow

I was amused by the dialogue, but I sorta had to make up what the characters did and what they looked like. You should read some scripts, and there's a ...

It is all too true that people fight because of the way that they look, to show superiority, or religion. It is in our human nature to fight and argue. ...

That was so funny! I was laughing so hard that my dog started barking and jumping at me. LOL I guess she doesn't like laughing people.

Please criticize all you want. Don't be afraid to be harsh. I need the experience. Jason Stone crouched through the trees, his rifle in front of him. One of the ...

It was truly touching. It reminds me of how my pets died in my hands. It seems that every little animal soul is taken away from me. But then. . ...

This poem is awesome! Since someone already found out what may be a error, and I can't find any more errors, I guess I'll just say this is a very ...

Hello I'm SwiftShadow. So it seems that you need a lot of editing. I'll help you with that. OH also from growing wolf ears and a tail, but on the ...

Hello, I'm SwiftShadow. So you

I agree with everyone here. Best friends falling in love with each other is so common for a story idea, that it's not even funny. I think that you giving ...

Whoa. I thought the story was very good. It kept me hooked from the beginning to the end. I felt that it needed some other words for scream. Like the ...

Thanks for reviewing. I wrote it at three in the morning, and my writings aren't as great. I'm going to edit some of the parts you said, and I agree ...

"Aimee! We're going to be late!" I shouted to my sister. Our brothers were already in the car, ready to go to school. No answer. I tapped my foot impatiently ...

Very nice. Are you going to make another chapter?

It's really funny and simple. It's long, but it was very detailed and you didn't tell all of Harry's past like other fanfictions I see on other sites. Nice work. ...

Hi everyone! I just signed up a few minutes ago. It seems that everybody is really nice. :D I like nice people. You can call me Shadow or Swift. I ...