Sweetness

Locked in the basement are secrets growing old; tortured by their demons, ever growing cold. They stir in the basement until the time is right; to show their loved ones ...

Realising he loves me

The Lego bricks tumble and fall, The men, they lie beneath it all, The guilty stand. Emotion: no change, Their bullets empty from any range. Their legs don't move, they ...

I love it

The Lego bricks tumble and fall, The men they lie beneath it all, The guilty stand, emotion, no change, Their bullets empty from any range. Their legs don't move, they ...

I love the last two lines, they complete the poem well and i think every teenager can relate because there so real, no parent realizes whats going on in there ...

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lane

I just have to recommend James Patterson, he's a great author, his books are such an easy read and there is always a twist. Or Michael Marshalls straw men if ...

I read it and enjoyed it but it wasnt an easy read, it also confuses fact and fiction was didn't really do me any good ...

i love this poem it's fantastic and well written ! Last stanza was weaker than the rest but still great job! :D

The rhyming wasn't forced which makes it easy to read! I know it was sad but i liked the ending! True subject too, which makes it even better but as ...

To say goodbye is hard but it's harder to not. And what stopped me? I forgot. I missed my chance, more so I miss you. I didn't say goodbye now ...

The swans pass by as a symbol of our love, the clouds they part, hope from above. Upon the soft earth, water twinkling at our feet, the flowers blossoming, smelling ...

My eyes well up, I gasp and I choke. I can't even remember the last time we spoke. It's what you wanted, peaceful, I know, I still wish it wasn't ...