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Re: What is Love?
That was amazingly sweet. The angel bit was an unexpected twist. But I thought Gabriel was a BOY angel. And why did Matthew not feel sad when Gabriel left? Did ...
Feb 6, 2008 -
Re: A Spirit Within
Silly Sydstix is right, you have blocks of words. And you may want to double-check on the forms of words that you use, like "accept" and "except". 'To Accept' is ...
Feb 6, 2008 -
Re: The Bed of Debauchery
The name of this is ReAlLy interesting. How did you come up with this story? You may want to work on word usage, y'know, when you said "a man shuffling ...
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Chance Encounter
kool. that was short, sweet, and to the point. It the guy she ran into---wha's his name?--Pierre? How do we know? The way the story flows is good, and her ...
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Gay is My Ex
:lol: haha, wow. That was...funny.omigah, he's GAY?! :oops: :smt005 this is one of those laugh till you cry kind of love stories/mistakes. i LOVE it!!!
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: One Night fixed up
NOOOOOO!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: Jason CAN"T die!!! And--And there was a ring in her purse and EVERYTHING!!! He was going to propose, wasn't he? :cry: :cry: :cry:
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Protecting the Fallen, First Story, Part 2
:shock: omigosh! that.book.is.AWESOME!!!!! :D Eric's hot, too. :wink: But that book!!!!!! :D PLEASE pm me/lemme no wen u post the next part!!! :cry: *begging* it's so COOL!!! nice imagery and ...
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks
:oops: u are SO much braver than me! i think Yaoi and Yuri stories are awsome, but i don't have the guts to write them myself. but, anyway... Your writing ...
Feb 1, 2008