Suzuhara

The blinding sun shone through my window, casting a bright light on my face. I squinted, threw the covers off of my body, stood up, and prepared for the day. ...

Hi There, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: Dead at the same time they traveled together. The wheel of karma had spun them completely free, and up into the stuff ...

1.) Violet was one of the finest planets in the three systems; resources under the fertile ground; the water-, helium- and oxygen-rich atmosphere similar enough to Earth’s to sustain human ...

Hi Moriah, I'm Suzu. This is my first time reading this, but here are my thouhgts: 1.) She couldn’t make sense of them and the failure of William’s scheme [omit ...

Hi there, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: 1.) For best mates, Reggie and I argue a lot. If I like mint-chocolate-chip ice cream, she has to say that strawberry ...

Hey there, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: 1.) My mother holds my death sentence in her hands. [This is a nice hook for a first chapter because it makes ...

Are you doing this description as part of a writing exercise to help you picture your character or are you planning on incorporating this into your prose? I'm asking because ...

Hey Jigs, Suzu here. This was a pleasant read because you've fashioned characters with personality and you've managed to put the reader right into their heads, letting us feel everything ...

Hi there, my name is Suzu. Here are my thoughts: Chapter One 1.) The soft grass underfoot, the smell of flowers and the warm, bright sun had always kept Desmond ...

Hi there, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: Jackson 1.) A part of him was surprised when he had found himself outside again, out of the small white cell, away ...

Hi there, I'm Suzu! Here are my thoughts: 1.) Shoot. The bell rings, and I have to be in Mr. Kyoski’s third period math class before the hall monitors hunt ...

Hi there, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: 1.) The pounding of feet sounded through the night, following the light footfalls and quick breathing of their quarry. Their shouts filled ...

[Hi there, I'm Suzu! Here are my thoughts.] 1.) The streets were vacant and dark. The streetlamps had all been taken away, for no one walked down these roads anymore. ...

[Hi there, these are my thoughts!] 1.) Whispers and murmurs flowed around her liquidly [This isn't a real adverb] as she passed the throngs of workers, each too terrified to ...

Okay so this is a first for me in writing science fiction. So I don't know how it will turn out.... I'll just right the beginning and if you guys ...