SushiSashimi333

I dunno whether to congratulate you or not XD I'm rewriting my story too, and let me say O_O It's work O_O But then again, it also improves... so I ...

Oh, flow is definitely a hard thing to solve u.u What I do is read things aloud, or I guess I just get this urge to start something new. I ...

Hey! Thanks for the review!! There were some things here I saw you didn't like that I kinda did on purpose though. (Not the an part, but seeing as that ...

Thank you so much!!! Sorry I had to pesture you though XD I'll see what I can do to help develop the setting a little more here and in the ...

Yeah, I get what you mean, I wish you luck when you go back and edit O.O

Hey! Thanks so much for the fast review! I'll consider your input on the beginning, I was actually just rambling there because it works easiest, I'll try to see what ...

Oh yeah! I actually already fixed the technicalities... just didn't put it up yet... >.>

XDXDXD So that's how these special challenges work XD Well, for that you did pretty good XD

I just realized something, it would seem I did have that italicized in the original, it just didn't come through here XD Thanks for pointing that out though, that means ...

Thank you so much for the review! All those typos DX I feel so ashamed. I'm so glad you caught them though :D I'm wondering, how did you like the ...

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O_O Gah DX Sorry, idk why this popped up twice

Oh DX I hate word limits, but that certainly makes sense. Glad I could help :D

XD Yeah, honestly I don't really know either. I was just going based off of what I've seen in books :p I'm most likely wrong.

I'm glad I was able to catch those things :D

Yeah, I write really short stuff DX I'm working on that though with the revamping :D I'm definitely changing around the order, and I have started to actually get to ...