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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Short story fantasy beginning

    I would tend to agree with most of the other reviews. It would read well if the more uneccessary of those complex words were replaced. The use of polyllabic words ...

    Apr 23, 2009


I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed and that necessary.
— Margaret Atwood