Surfergirl

It is completly fictional. No kid would do that. I know cup aren't sold like that, it is just that San Fran wuold be the best place. Thanks for the ...

Grammer is required but. It was very decriptive and makes me worry i might not win the challenge. :wink: Wellcome!

Hmmm. I read some of your other work and I KNOW you can do better. Put in some sincere effort. *plans on beating your writing challenge to a pulp

i know its creepy but you can thank zelithon for that, shesmy older sister and shes taught me everything i know. And might be weird that im only 11............... I ...

thx for replying, and just to let you know im 11 and i took my 15-yearold sisters account.

I liked it, but I was kind of confused during the first few dialogues. I wasn't sure why the house would make them fight? But overall I thought it was ...