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Thank you very much for the feedback! This is just a one-off, I'm afraid. Although my next short story (which will likely be titled 'A Superior Kind of Hero', if ...

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you very much for the constructive criticism - it is always muchly appreciated. And yes, long time no write; hope all is well with you.

Cheers for the feedback.

An English teacher that drinks, none-the-less. :p Thanks for reading!

Excellent - always good to hear someone enjoyed your writing.

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you very much for the feedback. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.

I think perhaps you misunderstand: I am of the opinion that you should explain the metaphor even less, and thus make it even shorter. :P This would also make people ...

Thanks for the feedback! Very good shout on the cave thing. That'll be fixed (hopefully along with the typos) in any future revisions I do.

Thanks for the feedback! Single quotation marks for speech are a British thing. I keep on forgetting American's find it odd.

I have the exact same problem! Not just with writing stories, but everything. You have no idea how many times I'll proofread a Facebook status (and they're like a sentence ...

Well. Poop.

The delayed introduction of the first person narration is intentional, but it's something both you and Lycando mentioned, so exactly how I go about doing it will be reconsidered when ...

Hi kayfortnight! Thanks for the review. The delayed introduction of the first person narration is intentional, but it's something both you and Lycando mentioned, so exactly how I go about ...