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That's fine. You don't need any more description than that. (Random note: watch your word usage - you use 'soy' twice really close together, and it reads awkwardly. When double ...

Have you still not finished FREAK? I want to read it already! I seem to remember you not being all that intersted in getting published - and going by your ...

I disagree with your second tip. 'Fancy' words should be avoided, not sought after. More often than not, they make your writing sound amateurish. George Orwell (author of Ninteen Eighty-Four ...

On 'said'- I'll use it sometimes. But what I use more of is what I call "action tags" which describe the character's body language. If you want to let readers ...

Yes, it is. I thought that was shown through the dialogue? All right, I'll clear that up. Are there any other problems that have been misrepresented as a lack of ...

Ok, because I tried to scatter bits of description throughout the chapters. my reviewers said I needed more though. They didn't really tell me how much.....:( Is it Alezrani you're ...

I've seen this set before, and I still disagree with #1. I doubt this, as I only wrote it an hour ago. =P Anyway! "Said" is bland. It conveys only ...

These are 7 simple ‘rules’ that will hopefully strengthen your writing. On a very basic level, what they really come down to is: simplicity, variety, and interest. But telling you ...

What makes you think you can't mention Earth?

No. I cackle with glee.

You don't.

I think the first line of any story is vital. I tend to spend a lot of time thinking about how I'm going to open a story. If it's not ...

Depends whether the garage belongs to Mister Browns or Mister Brown, or if there's more than one Mister Brown. Presumably you haven't been told this, in which case there's no ...

My tip: put it aside for a while (say - a month or so), and don't look at it/think of it all during this time. That'll help you come to ...

Writer Beware and Predictors and Editors are a must. So many scammers out there. Makes me sad.