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Sex sells. ^_^

There are a couple of cliched elements, but you've combined them well with each other (and the non-cliched parts) so that as a whole the story feels origional. So yeah, ...

I'd imagine it'd depend how much more.

Well, you'd find it extremely hard. Many publishers would reject it out of hand or claim it's 'unpublishable'. If you're really lucky you may find a publisher willing to give ...

GryphonFledgling: An adult novel under 90,000 or over 120,000 words is unlikely to be published.

YA novels tend to range from 40,000 to 80,000.

Card's book is almost two decades old. I don't have my copy with me, but I believe he even states in the opening that some of the advice he gives ...

Make sure it's a reputable agent, and not a scam or anything.

All rules can be broken, so long as you understand the rule and what is to be risked in doing so.

Yeah, you just use 'em to signify a new paragraph. On YWS, we just put a space between each paragraph, because idents don't come up. Indents can be used in ...

It's accepted now days, as long as you don't over do it. It can really help the flow of prose if used well. Don't use it in essays or scholarly ...

Finish The Broken. To be done by writing almost/every day.

Why should a prologue never make a reader say, 'Wow, s/he writes really well'? Should you lower the standard of you writing if it does?

You want more plot. Be sure not to just throw in filler (stuff that's only there to increase the word count).

In an attempt to not suck at writing, I’ve decided I’m gonna set myself a daily 800 word limit. Hopefully this’ll allow me lottsa practice, and give me a better ...