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It's not too graphic, it's too long. Find a way to describe the violence more succinctly, and it'll not only read better but have more impact too.

lol, don't worry about Jiggity. He's just rather ... passionate about the subject. ;)

Depends how often it happens, I think. If it's only once or twice, you could get away with the character finding out second hand. Any more than that, though, and ...

? Martin's A Song of Ice and Fire is epic fantasy, though.

What annoys me about fantasy races is indeed the whole 'one hat' thing. You have these ancient, mystical races - but then the entire race is only able to express ...

*moved to Fiction Discussion and Tips* Anyways: It sounds mostly fine to me as is. The only thing I'm not sure about is how she could have so many parties ...

Plagiarism is where you copy/paste actual sections from someone else's story, and claim you wrote it.

(I have to admit, I came in here expecting yet another Twilight rant.) Sounds kind of like a YA version of Bret Easton Ellis, only without the awesome that is ...

Been flicking through her website. Looks really professional. Oh my god at the reviews, though. Ended up finding my way to her Facebook page. You guys made my day. To ...

Blink's been engaging in an online war with her.

I think it would be awesome.

I can't imagine you having any sort of problem. There are already several books and films, and even comics and video games, dealing with Russia as a hostile, invading country.

All I can really think of is something written by Neil Gaiman. His books cross pop culture (what you're after) with high culture (what your teachers are after). You could ...

Everytime you change from one character POV to another, make sure you start a new paragraph. If you don't, it can get very confusing. If the character is another location, ...

Just about anything to do with sex should be rated R. As a rule of thumb: if you're unsure what to rate a story/poem, go for the higher rating.