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Sleeping Valor: I've only ever heard of the Type I circumsion. That alone is bad enough - Type III is beyond bad. Sewing up the vagina? :shock:

Well, as with all words in writing, swear words have to be correctly used, not just thrown randomly in for the heck of it.

I never got to the end of Animorphs. I did try, but the next book I needed was only available for like £50, and there's no way I'm paying that ...

Muse: Gah, how dare you be so pretty. Made me all hot and bothered now... :P Loose: That bunny picture is strangely scary. :shock: Fabien: Dude, cool hate. And because ...

That tends to annoy many people though. I wouldn't recommend doing it.

You don't think being able to orgasm is important? OverEasy: Female circumsion involves the removal of the clitorus. As most women are only able to orgasm via clitoral stimulation, cutting ...

I don't prefer either - it depends on the story. Typically, I treat 3rd person as default, and only really use 1st person in stories where I want to create ...

Do people who are circumcised ever find themselves wishing they hadn't been? I guess that would be a good question to have answered. Well, there are groups that help people ...

Free indrect speech says swearing in third person = okay. I honestly don't understand everyone's opposition to it. :( When writing in third person, the narrator often takes on the ...

Female circumsion should be illegal if it isn't already. It has no medical benefits, causes an insane ammount of pain, is very dangerous (incl. making giving birth even more dangerous), ...

There are potential medical benefits, I believe. Namely: less likely to contract AIDs, less likely to get an infection down there (easier to clean), and less likely to suffer from ...

I'm up. But it's 2:50 am, so perhaps I should go to bed?

This may be a legitimate criticism of Evolution, this question might be very valid and may lead to a better understanding. If it weren't for your preconceived conclusion that it ...

Swearing in third person is fine. In fact, if your POV character swears, I encourage you to do it. It helps to give the narration the voice of the POV ...

Thanks for the reviews guys. ^_^ I'll be sure to refer back to your crits when I come to edit this in a couple of days. For anyone interested, Part ...