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Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
I feel a bit cheeky asking for a review, as you're the third person I've now asked, but no one (beyond the most awesome Blink) seems interested in reading my ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: First in best dressed.
Thanks for the review. It was incredibly helpful. =) I'm suprised you haven't had more requests. Consider this post to be like a testimonial, or something. Anything you'd like me ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Post your pic...3
Post Your Pic Here [5]. ^_^
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Vice President Choice
You could also turn that around and say that it's silly to suppose that it's okay to kill a human baby, but wrong to kill an animal, though.
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: First in best dressed.
It's already had two reviews, but if you have the time, I'd love to hear your thoughts on Chapter One of The Broken . =)
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Looking Glass Prologue
Hey there Kaylyn. =) Caolyn walked up the woman, intending to buy it. I’m assuming you meant that she walked up TO the woman, not that she walked up the ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: The Shredder
Hey Thunder. 8) I'd be much endebted to you if you could give me your opinion on The Broken -- Traitor Colonel -- Chapter One . It's the first draft ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: DO plants have feelings, Do they feel pain.
Tell your friends to read a biology textbook. ;) As Clo pointed out, plants just don't have the necesary parts to register pain or have emotions.
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: A Tale
Oh my, how is it that no one has commented on this yet? “It is one of the old gods,” they whispered when he stepped into the room. This is ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Alexandrite
She hoped it was expensive, her mother told her not to try to spend too much today. This sentence is actually grammatically incorrect. It’s what we call a comma splice, ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Avargorn: S.S - Prologue
Hey Fellow. =) I seem to remember you saying that English isn’t your first language or something? Anyway, you have some awkwardly phrased sentences and switch tenses a few times ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: The Broken -- Traitor Colonel -- Chapter One
Leo. And suddenly Leo was standing in the woods, his bare feet itching against the undergrowth and his skin smothered in goose bumps. He blinked, looked down, and realised he ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Are you writing a novel right now?
Haha, I am actually. Just started the first draft yesterday. 1,600 words down, only 98,400 to go!
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: I need a critique-er
Hey Tabithalillian. =) The Will Review For Food forum is actually for advertising yourself to review other people's stories/poems, not to request reviews from others. If you want to request ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: What do you love about writing?
I enjoy the 'creating' aspect of it. I also enjoy editing. (I'm weird like that.)
Sep 2, 2008
