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I thought it was the rubbish internet connection here in my student house...

Silent Music: Be polite! Personal attacks are not acceptable in the Debate Forum (or anywhere else for that matter) in any shape or form. Please stop.

That's not what I look like at all. ------ I personally prefer the all-purple one. The roots are done better, as are the leaves.

Should 'pro-life' then be called 'anti-abortion', or perhaps 'anti-choice'? 'Pro-life' is every bit the linguistic masturbation that 'pro-choice' is.

Sweet. 8)

Lulu is certainly good. You can self publish it for free, and for a fair fee you can give it a barcode and have it put on Amazon and all ...

One could just as ask what the point of chapters is. ;)

I read that. You feel wrong. What you've proposed - General Fiction - is what the Other Fiction forum is for. It just has a name you don't like.

You should take your own advice. Read, girl. ;) Other fiction is general fiction. It just has a different name to the one you've proposed.

Most young writers are far more interested in writing genre fiction than literary fiction. If you're interested in writing literary fiction, how YWS classifies its forums won't change anything; likewi

That's a bit unfair. You've gotta write a better novel in far less time. It took him a month to do the plan, a year to do the first draft, ...

Looks good. It's concise, opens with a good hook (which will hopefully keep the agent reading beyond the first line) and you've managed to sum up your novel well. Only ...

You could use the Advanced Critiques forum. You post up a large part or even all of your novel, and you'll get detailed feedback on all that you have posted ...

Hey PA. =) I'd really appreciate a critique of Chapter One of The Broken. =) In particular I'd like to hear about pacing, and what you think about the main ...

(Chapter One) ------------------ Lucy. Her prison was pleasant enough, Lucy supposed. It wasn’t the prison itself that angered her, really, it was the fact that it was a prison at ...