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I'm guessing it's the parts that refer to the Earth being still, and refer to the Sun going around it.

It all varies a lot from one person to another.

The ads brought me here as well. =) This is all very helpful. I'd very much like to set up a website one day (about what, I'm not yet sure), ...

... what did I just watch? That doesn't look a thing like Dragon Ball. :? All the characters look and act completely different to their anime counter-parts.

The only time I've ever used chat language, or seen another JM/mod use it, has been in an intentionally ironic manner. That's hardly the same as making 80% of your ...

There's no fast or hard rule. Just introduce it when you feel it should be.

God told it to, obviously. XD Nobody can prove He didn't, ergo it must be true. ;)

has a bunch of stuff. At least, I assume it does. I bookmarked it years ago, when I was planning on learning to draw better, and just sort of never ...

I don't think I've ever seen someone that skinny before. Where do her internal organs go?

^_^

First you should send it to an agent, and then they'll present it to publishers. There's a lotta stuff to consider when sending your novel to an agent. First and ...

w00t, Blink wrote something! =) Right, I’ll start off with a few quick observations: He came running to the bridge direly, Direly? That’s an unusual word to use. Not sure ...

What Nate said. These books are fun. Most readers (teenage or otherwise) aren't that bothered that the writing isn't great, so long as it's readable.

Jiggity and Blink for all their awesome reviews of The Broken ! =D

O.o - I tells ya. this is a case of you, the writer, recognising that the soldier is overplaying this. In fact, that whole line is you, talking to yourself. ...