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How did you possibly concieve of a metaphysical epic in only the 5th grade? 0_0

To be fair, as it's a YA novel, it could potentially be as 'short' as 40k words. Still, six days is an insane achievement no matter how you cut it. ...

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Hi there NightMistress. ^_^ The entire first half of the conversation is just question after question after question. Vary it more, as it currently feels like we're being beat around ...

I mean, is there any real evidence for evolution, either? Oh yeah, an insane ammount. - There's loads fossils of intermediate 'missing links' (not just ape/humans, but also whales with ...

Nice. 8) I might well have to check this book out once it's ... out.

Not all poems need to rhyme, no. Really, if you want to get an idea of what poems are like, try to get your hands on a book of poetry. ...

Oh wow, how did all those "solider"s get in there? 0_0 And your idea about rewriting this from Lucy's point of view could actually work really well. I was considering ...

They were still now, ceasing there tormenting dance, there whispering that no one but myself seemed to hear. ‘there’ = ‘their.’ Remember: There - for places and locations. (Remember, it’s ...

‘fraid I don’t really have much to offer outside of what Clo has said. =( All I can really add is: watch your descriptions/metaphors, as here you described some things ...

(Chapter One) (Chapter Two) (Chapter Three) (Chapter Four) (Chapter Five) (Chapter Six) ------------------ Leo. The hall echoed as its twin doors banged open. Compared to the blasts made by the ...

Thanks guys. ^_^ As always, you've both been loads of help.

Kids grow up so fast.

0_0 That's almost 10,000 words long. You'll want to split it up into 5-8 different parts and post them sperately, 'cos few people are willing to review something so long ...

Can we post Fanfiction. If its a novel? Can't imagine why not. Make sure you mention what it's a fan fiction of , though.