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So, you're happy to ignore one of Christ's teaching (turn the other cheek), but insist on applying a verse from the OT (homosexuality is wrong)? Um.

Nice read :). There's one bit that confuses me slightly: If I had put it in other words it would have been quite difficult not to sound dull, for I ...

Wooh, we're back :).

Ooh, and intriguing (and well written) beginning. Bravo :). My only suggestion is this: ‘Heck, I’m hardly making sense.’ I think that could maybe do with some sort of emphasise ...

Surreal 8). BTW, I noticed this... The smell was terrible and effected Anikyru instantly. Shouldn't it be 'affected'?

Oh, you're English too? Well, let me greet you in real English. Yo yo yo homie, yo! (wait, that's not real English...)

Wow, that's cool. Not to mention incredibly useful 8). Wow, I think I'm in love with this site :P. *bookmarks site*

I was bored :).

Manifesto of the Liberal-Fascist Party ‘Make love, then war.’ Should we be elected the leader of the United Kingdom, we promise to make the following changes: 1) Everyone will be ...

Thanky muchy for the reviewy :). I've fixed the 'dreamlike' and the 'just lay still' 8). On Sarah being afraid, have you ever noticed that little children are generally not ...

Gee, you'd think they'd be proud of their daughter. B's aren't a bad grade.

Heh, I'm in the liking of this here begining (is there going to be more?). The downside? I'm actually rather confused about the whole scientist thingy :P.

An interesting start to your story :), this certainly has some potential, and I like the setting. You have a problem with the formatting - I assume you used indents ...

I haven't really posted a story here for quite a while, so today I figured I'd quickly write one out. This isn't the type of story I normally write, but ...

I don't know, I rather liked it. It certainly had feeling in it (including the last lines). I'm not sure how I'd improve it (but then, I was never much ...