Sureal

I had a lucid dream last night ^_^. Anyways, loving the poem. Not much I can say (although I'd be the first to admit that I can't crit poetry ;)).

Hey. Nice revision :). ‘Aiden was just about to restart when the screen vanished and a browser window opened of its own accord , “Dad!” he yelled.’ - Should be ...

Well, I don't know about that place, but I tried out and had pretty much the same results (minus being called a damn kid).

By the way, Sureal, this poem was dedicated to Ann Coulter, and she is the evil woman who wrote the books "Godless" and "How to Talk to a Liberal If ...

Just because it's a negative emotion doesn't make it a bad poem.

I like it :). Only thing is... some of the text can be kindda hard to read. None of it is illegible, but a couple of times I had a ...

Daeth to all the tyops in the wrold! Srory, culodn't rseist... ;)

Personally, I enjoyed it. I liked the repeated use of the same template, but other than that can't really give me of a crit (I aint too good at critting ...

Thank's for the crit :). I agree with you on the description, and will try to improve that in the next revision 8).

Yo 8). ‘He was going on a quest All the way to the Elven realm too.’ - Needs a full stop (‘.’) after ‘quest’ and before ‘All’. ‘the answers of ...

Edited and revised it. Whaddayah think?

Congraty-you-lations :)!

Drugs are bad, m'kay? Having said that, I have tried cannabis. I don't recommend it, simply cos I hate the taste (which I way I've never actually been under the ...

Thanks muchy to everyone who reviewed this. I'm now off to revise it :). And Snoink... that has got to be one of the... imaginative... crits I have ever recieved ...

Hello :). ‘Almost all the rooms were out lined in blue’ - ‘out lined’ = ‘outlined’. ‘ “Look,” she paused, “Alex,” she said his name like she was wiping dog ...