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Hello, and welcome to the site ^_^. ‘now familiar sight of the 8 by 9 cell.’ - It’s generally better to write numbers rather than use figures. As in, ‘eight ...

‘In the small town of Camilla, a stranger named Christian scurries down the street which smelled of fresh rain.’ - Is this the only street that smells like rain? It’d ...

Jack: Nate posted it here a while ago. I think I was the only one who noticed it ;).

Read the first one. Hated it. Refused to read anymore.

Well, I'm English... so happy Thursday :)!

I could tell they were boys. They're rather feminine looking, but that's quite common in anime (well, as far as I'm aware - I don't actually know much about anime). ...

Happy Birthday m'dear! *parties* ... why's the world spinning?

Try just sitting down and force yourself to write. Don't worry about quality of writing - just write. Quality can come in the edit. Works for me :).

Buy the Writers and Artists Yearbook (or something similiar). It has loads of tips and advice, and also gives a listing of Literary Agents and Publishers (and their contact details). ...

Learning to Write Fiction (For Beginners) This article is really aimed at those who are new/ish to the world of writing fiction, although others may wish to read it, if ...

Often I find that just starting to write gets me in the right mood (if I wasn't already). So I can just sit down whenever and carry on my novel. ...

I've a posted the rough-version of Chapter One of my NaNo novel.

Hey, sounds like you're having a great time there :). Tis also interessting to hear how Japan differs from the US/Canada - those toliets sound cool 8).

‘I was like her once: a foolish mortal.’ - You’ve already used the term ‘foolish mortal’ once. This time round it feels redundant. ‘Her body is light and caring her ...

Ooh, tis cool. My only complaint would be the very last sentance - 'I close my eyes and then I wake again.' This just doesn't read as fluidly as the ...