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I partially agree with you on point three. If I try and plan the novel out, I never get anyway. I find I work much better if I only have ...

I'll open word and and read through the piece. Everytime I reach a sentance I wish to comment on, I'll copy/paste it into word, add italics tags and comment in ...

I'll join the crazy review week. I usually do a loads of crits at the weekend anyways, but this'll add extra incentive :).

Thanks to everyone who critted (especially aeroman, who gave heaps of help :)). I'm currently reworking and editting this into the second draft :).

Got to 16,000 words (yay - longest story I've ever written) before coursework overwhelmed me. Will finish the novel at a later date.

The real namde of the Wii was released months ago - before you left for Japan I believe ;).

Oh, I got confused. Nevermind then.

Hi ^_^. ‘but in his case it worked perfectly.’ - Awkward phrase. Something like, ‘but for him it worked perfectly’ may work better. ‘She lost it then.’ - ‘then’ is ...

‘I said, striding up to the bar never the less.’ - never the less detracts from this sentence (as we already know the character is ignoring what the man said). ...

You have Final Fantasy XII? Don't get it in Europe till Feb... :(

Hello, and welcome to the site ^_^. You shouldn't hate your stories. You should love them and work on improving them :). After all, do you really think the first ...

Avoiding the Passive Voice This is actually a subject area that I’ve only really recently fully understood. I used to over-use the passive voice, and this really damaged my fiction. ...

This was an enjoyable story. And - and this always vital for a novel - caught my attention from the first sentance. Some parts of this feel redundany - mainly ...

I like it :). Although some of the kicks are kindda slow/weak.

Neither have I.