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Although this was probably meant to be written as a summary of the tale, I still didn't feel connected in anyway to it. We're kept at arm's length from the ...

I find it helps to know what you're doing right, just as it helps to know what you're doing wrong. A writer needs to know what their strengths and weaknesses ...

The Daemon’s Bride He works, shaping and crafting my future happiness with His tools of science. I watch, a foul smile on a foul face. She will be like me, ...

‘Wait for that moment between heartbeats, where everything is perfectly still, all while riding the edge, the technique describing keeping the trigger on his .50 caliber bolt action sniper rifle ...

Hello, and welcome to the site ^_^. This story reminds me of my own. Not really in content (although there are similarities), but in writing style. The style you have ...

Hello Myth ^_^. Just a quick crit of The Beginning, ‘Behind them were the tops of trees and few chimneys, in the far distant was a clock tower’ - The ...

'You have no sex life.' ZOMG - tis accurate! XD

Hello ^_^. ‘Jimmy, a country boy lived with his grandma. Jimmy was only nine and had already seen or known the world a lot, though he never understood his Grandma ...

I too have this problem (well... to a degree). But, once I've started reading a story, I will always read it through to the end (and give a crit).

I've never written a screenplay before. But I'll give this a go anyway :).

Um, I hear 'I Am Legend' is meant to be quite good. Or you could go back to the origional and check out 'Dracula'. Although I haven't actually read either ...

Nice artical ^_^. And to add on: has manuscript layouts (it talks about double typing, fonts etc) :).

Don't get me wrong - I do intend to read the Inheritance series (I wouldn't dare judge a book properly without reading it). My last post is just based on ...

I have never read any of the Inheritance series. However, from grazing reviews, it does appear to be a rather poor series (largely due to a complete lack of origionality).

No worries ^_^. Also - if I haven't yet said it (I cannae remember) - welcome :).