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If you want more replies, try critting other people's work. Technically, you shouldn't have actually posted any of your own work yet, as the rules say you should crit two ...

I want to be a part time astronaut, part time ninja. In this way I will be the envy of all six year olds.

Start in the middle, with some sort of action already taking place. Or use your first line to build a sense of mystery. Examples, taken from my own work: "Leo ...

Hello Shadowsun :). 1) Pick your target audience. At the moment you seem to be in a sort of limbo, unsure if you're aiming this story at people familiar with ...

No, I prefer not to - makes life easier that way. No potential copyright problems. For some reason, AlienSkin Magazine decided to send me another email, rejecting my story again, ...

CO2 accounts for (by volume) only 0.0383% of the atmosphere. There is 383ppmv (parts per million) of CO2 in the atmosphere. This is a very small ammount. So if only ...

Heh, that's what I thought you really meant :).

It seems that more and more it's the kids that do go to church that are the ones being made fun of--instead of the kids that don't . Maybe I'm ...

I'd be thinking something along the lines of "ZOMG, cult!" The letters "B" and "S" would also come up. But then, I'm also an atheist, materialist, sceptic and believer in ...

I am no chauvinist i don't think a woman could do it Four times outta five, anyone who says "I'm not chauvinist, but...", "I'm no racist, but..." or any similiar ...

I'd quite like to get into nature photography. Unfortunatly, I don't even have a camera :P. I think the butterfly with its wings spread is the best.

I said shave. I'm male too...

I say shave :).

Nope. I see no reason to believe in them.

write me: I'm starting to suspect that we both mean different things when we say 'teach Creationism in school'. I have no problem with a teacher mentioning it in class, ...