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All very true, especially number 2 and number 5. A couple of other ones: -- Your story is too longer. Anything over 3,000ish words is gonna look really rather long, ...

Heya, WritingSpitfire! You're probably gonna find this particular piece of advice somewhat frustrating, but it is what I think, and I do honestly believe it'll make your novel better. This ...

Wooh, South FTW. Disappointed that neither Canterbury nor my home town (not sure what that'd come under, though - possibly Milton Keynes, actually? that's the biggest town in Buckinghamshire) are ...

Not really the place to ask for reviews, I'm afraid. There's some good tips here, though. Also, check out the Will Review For Food forum. =) Locked.

Wow, you’re a fantastic writer. I wish I were as talented as you when I was your age. If you don’t carry on practicing and getting better I shall have ...

lol, don't worry about Jiggity. He's just rather ... passionate about the subject. ;)

Depends how often it happens, I think. If it's only once or twice, you could get away with the character finding out second hand. Any more than that, though, and ...

? Martin's A Song of Ice and Fire is epic fantasy, though.

Because evil pixies come and steal the good feelings, and then eat them. They do this in the hope of turning the entire population into emos. (They think the colour ...

Could I just clone myself five times?

"Why is everyone using 'nebbish' as an adjective, when it's really a noun?" said F.R.E.D., making a sad face.

Thanks for the links. Was just wondering where to donate too.

My tip: put it aside for a while (say - a month or so), and don't look at it/think of it all during this time. That'll help you come to ...

’ello, Jigster! Told you I’d get around to reviewing Maharaj eventually. ;) Anyway, whilst your writing is all very good, and you got a great imagination, and all that other ...

What annoys me about fantasy races is indeed the whole 'one hat' thing. You have these ancient, mystical races - but then the entire race is only able to express ...