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Cadium: They intend for Knut to be as independant of humans as possible. At the moment, there are only humans looking after him because it'd be impossible for him to ...

Thankyou so much Imp. ^_^ I'll get around to editing this as soon as I find the time (about a week from now), as well writing the third chapter. Just ...

First off: fix your paragraph formatting - it's distracting at the moment. Double-space all of the paragraphs (and that includes each new line of speech), not just half of it. ...

Hello Incan ^_^. As usual, your writing is excellent. However, you refer to everyone as 'he', and often switch between which character your talking about. At times, this can be ...

Have you had problems insulting yourself before? Really, there it no need. No no, she's done it before.

Hey - you've almost got an agent :). Do you have any experience in writing screen plays? Jennafina: Well, he still hasn't definately been accepted by Folio yet. And then, ...

Snap: Actually, Jesus' influence wasn't really felt until later. At his time, and after his death, he still only had relatively few followers (hence the lack of historical info on ...

When the initial acronyms (BC and AD) were set, it was in a very Christian dominated world. We no longer live in that world, and because of that, some have ...

Chadni: Well, not really, cos apart from the whole 'blasphemous' thing, the only problem is the word masturbate, which doesn't deserve an R rating.

1) Fix yeh spelling and grammar, 2) Give this a rating thing (PG?), 3) This isn't poetry. However, I disagree with comments that it should be removed because it's 'blasphemous' ...

Also who wouldn't want to hug that polar bear?

They argue that current treatment of the cub is inhumane and could cause him future difficulties interacting with fellow polar bears. Being dead would make it easier for him to ...

F**K yeah! Wow, way to go dude 8). Even if they don't ultimately accept you, that's still further than many people get.

Not really. Setting, themes and characters are planned out before hand, as are some key scenes (including plot twists), but for the most part, I only think a chapter or ...

Good luck dude.