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I accept it, largely based off the fact that it's accepted by Climate Scientists, who are the ones who are actually looking at the evidence and doing the experiments. The ...

Although the Northern Lights is a better name, The Golden Compass fits in with the sequals' names, which are both also named after an object. I'm looking forwards to this ...

On the 7th of April?

I tend to use third person as default, and first person in special cases. By special cases, I mean: - stories driven by characterisation, - stories in which the main ...

Flemzo: Apparently it's only a nut-head idea within the American public. In England, it's been well established for a long time. Within the scientific community - including Climate Scientists (who ...

Hello. Your writing style reads and flows well, so it'd be criminial of me not to open this crit without mentioning that. However, I feel the main weakness with this ...

Pandora’s Tears Chapter Three -- Officer Harding Date: 14th August, 2011 The house was surrounded by a dozen-or-so men, most clad in the brown leathers of the town guard. Although ...

Araidne: Except it's not that simple, mainly cos you pulled your definition of 'pregnancy' outta the thin air. ;) Gyrfalcon: You cannot create the law based off 'well, if we're ...

Don't know anything about washing them, but next time you get a new book, trying keeping it wrapped in a plastic bag when put them in your book bag.

Hello Pyxis. ^_^ I have to say - this is pretty good. But you haven’t yet got the hang of speech punctuation, which is a trick beast. Your dialogue, also, ...

Yay, demons! (Demons are cool 8)) 'She runs. She disappears. She reappears. She is gone.' - This line confuses me. Okay, so she runs and she disappears from sight. But ...

You should certainly continue with your story (and that applies to everyone reading this). However, might I suggest that you open the story with some sort of action (eg. a ...

Hello Fantasyartist, me again. :P Seth woke up in a warm and extremely comfortable bed with a feeling of confusion and dull pain in his head. - Suggestions: ‘Seth woke ...

1) Try critting lots of people. Not only may you get the occasional 'thank you' crit in return, but you'll also attract the attention of the other critters. 2) Try ...

I've made a few minor edits for Chapter Two.