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The '88 Ford just beats me. Curses.

Being old.

No. My life is a lie.

Hi Tigersmoon. Your idea has potential. My main concern at this point is that I feel I've encountered a few stories where people are being hunted down because they have ...

Does it help with the confusion if I tweak the language I'm using? "A teenager must rescue her last surviving friend, who has been snatched away by a dark god, ...

Thank you very much to each and every one of you. The feedback I've received has been invaluable. After much musing, I've reworked the one sentence summary: "A teenager must ...

Hi guys, I've put together a one sentence summary of a YA sci-fi novel I'm thinking of writing. Would appreciate some (preferably brutally honest ) opinions on it before I ...

- Don't tell me your character's eye colour. I really don't care what it is. - Anyone can be a good writer, if they learn how to be. - It's ...

I said yes, and it's because the two cultures between England/Scotland are very different from each other and sometimes even antagonistic to each other! But what do I know, being ...

Thank you @FatCowsSis for the win and the nice words, and thank you all for the congratulations. I feel much loved, although my girlfriend will probably be disappointed to find ...

A starting point for you:

I fully agree that education is important. No sex before marriage is an impractical idea, as not everyone is able to pull it off, and a repressed sexuality can have ...

It's not too graphic, it's too long. Find a way to describe the violence more succinctly, and it'll not only read better but have more impact too.

What a fetus (aborted or otherwise) looks like is completely beside the point. Posting gruesome pictures to try to shock people into agreeing with you is bad form, and an ...