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When, paragraphing, remember to put a line between ALL paragraphs. You seem to have only put a blank line between some paragraphs, resulting in some rather random clumps. This is ...

Hello, Jiggity. :) 1. The boy jumped, a small scream escaping his throat. This feels rather melodramatic compared with what’s happened so far. It’s mainly the word ‘scream’ that feels ...

I doubt it's cos of her age. Usually, being able to point out that a 16 (or whatever) year old wrote the story is a selling point. By 'more years' ...

Alrighty there, Joeducktape. ^_^ Just a quick, ‘thank yah’ crit, for reviewing my piece. There wasn’t any breeze that day , which was odd , honestly. There were gloomy , ...

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Sure, why not?

What I meant by hardback, was that they were origionally put on sale in only hardback format. I seem to remember the first three books being only softback when they ...

'Today, we overthrow the human opressors!' A dramatic pause, punctuated only by the gentle swishing of the tide and the clicking of a lone crab, filled the alcove. 'Shut up, ...

7/10 (Given that he's a ninja, this question does indeed require a good deal of thought.) Um... ... ... ... ... ... Hermione's hot.

I work in a small, quiet Blockbusters. Basically, I get paid to watch Family Guy and Scrubs in the back, and occasionally serve a customer (although Friday and Saturdays can ...

(It allows someone who has not yet finished the book to read this thread, without fear of spoilers. For everyone who has finished, just click the box, and you can ...

I feel like the six previous books were almost like an introduction to this one. All the different books have introduced various different parts of the Harry Potter mythology, and ...

Gah. I forgot about the Book Reviews forum - I checked everywhere but there. XD

Well, I can't see any other topics on this (although I may have overlooked it)... And wow, that was a good book. Took me a little longer to read than ...

C-Dette: That's been made into a movie, hasn't it? I work in Blockbusters, so I've seen the trailer like a hundred times... *twitches* It looks pretty interesting though. I'll have ...