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I think the first line of any story is vital. I tend to spend a lot of time thinking about how I'm going to open a story. If it's not ...

This is, of course, the only way people will take the YOUNG WRITERS SOCIETY seriously. Let's all work together, people, to make this thang happen .

You'll have to PM Nate , I believe.

The Digital Economy Bill is so stupid. It'll be easy to get around for tech-savvy people (read: pirates), and will quite possibly result in a lot of law-abiding citizens getting ...

Hi there, JapaneseNinja! Welcome to the site. =) This is an intriguing opening you have here, but I think it needs some touching up. 1) First thing is, I'm left ...

Hello! I like this. You've captured a very short moment in time, and I think you've done it well. The story is haunting and emotional, without any of the sort ...

Don't you mean Israel and Palestine? Apart from a few (seemingly idle) threats, Iran hasn't really had much interaction with Israel.

Well, obviously he's gonna avoid coming to the UK now. But that doesn't change much. Dawkins and Hitchens have basically got him Checkmate'd - if he comes, he'll be arrested, ...

I'd recommend against this, actually. I know it seems all romantic and stuff, but the stuff that works in romantic films/books isn't what works in real life. You're likely to ...

'sup people. ^_^ Thanks everyone for your feedback. I've made some minor changes to this chapter, and hope to do some more radical edits later on. Chapter 2 and 3 ...

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If you wanna go the self publishing route, it's probably the best thing you can go with. You get lots of control over your book, and (best of all) there's ...

I dunno. I quite like the three forum options (Community, Read/Write, Groups) being next to each other. It just sort of makes sense. Moving them apart would make things more ...

Heya, welcome to the site! I approve of your avatar. Hope you enjoy your time here. =)

Cool, looking forward to this. =)