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When I was reading this, I was thinking, 'this isn't up to Jack's usual standard.' Then I looked at the date and it all made sense. ^_^

The best advice I can think to give you right now: avoid cliches. ^_^ Your first two lines are horribly cliched. I think you rhymed well, though. The rhyme scheme ...

Vampire stories are fun. I've never actually written one before, but I fully intend to one day soon.

Bonobo Chimpanzee. I like being sentinent...

Finish The Broken. To be done by writing almost/every day.

Why should a prologue never make a reader say, 'Wow, s/he writes really well'? Should you lower the standard of you writing if it does?

Open the file on your computer. Highlight all the text you want to post on the site. Copy it (ctrl+c), come over to YWS, make a new post, paste it ...

If you're using Word: hit CTRL+F (for the 'find' function), click on 'Replace', type '^P' (that's the symbol for paragraph) into 'Find What', and type ^P^P into 'Replace With'. Hit ...

I forsee two problems: 1) New members not able to work out why they're unable to post up their work. 2) People 'padding' in their reviews to get the full ...

’lo Jiggity. ^_^ Apart from his desk , and stuffed bookcase , there was no other furniture in the sparse, austere room. I don’t think the bolded commas are really ...

Hello there. ^_^ To answer your questions: - The quantity and colour of your stars is dependant upon the number of reviews (for other people's stories and poems) you've given. ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. Writing and reviewing is teh awesome. Not only do you get feedback on your writings - which, apart from being nice, is also extremely helpful ...

Hello there Gothgirl01. ^_^ I could go over spelling and grammar errors in this, but I'll leave that for another time. (Try re-reading this a few times to spot them ...

Yay, I was helpful. ^_^

I'm really impressed with your dedication. I'm trying to get more crits in at the moment too, but doubt I'm gonna manage a mean of three crits a day (I ...