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It seems a bit unfair to compare 16th Century drama to 21st Century prose - they're two very different things. =P What I was trying to say can essentially be ...

Rawr, hello you. Don't worry too much if you don't have the time, but I'd certainly appreciate some feedback on the opening chapter of my long short story 'Foxes'. Been ...

Actually, many young adult novels are under 50,000 words. They may go as low as 40,000 words. To be honest, there are no hard, definitive cut-off points on what constitute ...

Novels are typically around 100,000 words. It can go under or over a li'l depending on the genre and the age group it's aimed for. Anything over 120,000 words is ...

I think in terms of changing the world, 3D printers are interesting. So far they can't make much, but as the technology improves, things are going to get interesting . ...

Consider writing a story that has less focus on plot, and more on character exploration? If you can handle a bit (well ... okay, a lot) of sex and violence, ...

That's fine. You don't need any more description than that. (Random note: watch your word usage - you use 'soy' twice really close together, and it reads awkwardly. When double ...

Where is that from? It was taken by the Voyager 1 in 1990 - about 3.7 billion miles (or about 6 billion kilometers) from Earth.

The 'Pale Blue Dot.' Yes, that li'l dot is the Earth.

Have you still not finished FREAK? I want to read it already! I seem to remember you not being all that intersted in getting published - and going by your ...

I disagree with your second tip. 'Fancy' words should be avoided, not sought after. More often than not, they make your writing sound amateurish. George Orwell (author of Ninteen Eighty-Four ...

Xena.

On 'said'- I'll use it sometimes. But what I use more of is what I call "action tags" which describe the character's body language. If you want to let readers ...

Yes, it is. I thought that was shown through the dialogue? All right, I'll clear that up. Are there any other problems that have been misrepresented as a lack of ...

Ok, because I tried to scatter bits of description throughout the chapters. my reviewers said I needed more though. They didn't really tell me how much.....:( Is it Alezrani you're ...