Superfreakazoid

Thank you both, and evolves was really the word that fit to me, so it's what I put. Backgroundbob got my line of thinking.

Thank you both, and I swear I did the italics thing right, I knew it was suposed to be that way, but I guess I didn't.

The incense of your body slides over my face. So I lean back and feel it Would you caress me with your chivalry? Fooled by your politician’s smile, your voice ...

I know what this is about, but you probably won't. ----- I didn’t break it, it was him. Blame me for the lost pieces of your heart. Sticky are your ...

bluemurder bluemurder you'd never ever guess that the color of the sky is the same as that of murder not you, nor you, not I she never saw his many ...

Thank you so much!

No, it's not, sorry about that. Curse typos and all their descendants. Yeah, normally I don't like dark stuff like this or write dark stuff like this for that matter, ...

MistyLynn: Thanks, I was hoping it would create some sort of dream-reality. Natyr Lucio: Hee hee, a rather uniue way to describe it, thanks. zelithon: Thank you, glad you enjoyed ...

The Black Rose: Thanks so much. Do you remember me? It's Ramona (ramona_the_karma_chameleon@hotmail.com.) Skye Demon: Thank you. I really appreciate it.

Don’t. Handing me your plastic smiles, Don’t you have the decency to at least put them on a silver platter first? I know you have many to spare. Won’t. Showing ...

“Hand me a glass of wine, my dear,” The scales on your wrists escape me. Ripple with me above the ground. How is it my head is as smoggy as ...

Thanks, all, I'll see if I can revise it (this is a lie, I will think about it then get lazy and not do it.)

Oh, wow! Pseudomuse (I always tought that was the RADICALEST name)? Hey, yeah, it is Ramona.

Imaginaitive, I suppose, putting yourself there, but also cliche. There are a lot of rhymes in this piece that seem to be forced and overall, I think this poem could ...

This is an awesome piece, the format makes it flow so magnificently. It's quite a clever piece, using few words to get a point across. I like it a lot.