SuperSquirrel

Ernie walked into his office at Cibus. Meagan, his secretary, handed him his schedule for the day. "Well," Ernie remarked, "it looks like today is less busy than most." "I ...

Jessica, the second chapter is uploaded here:

Ernest Rudolph Rawson was born on March 23, 2025 in Kinsad, Maine. A rather small community, it had officially become a town eight years earlier. Kinsad was a model communtity ...

I liked this story. Because JulNoWriMo is now running, this review is mostly grammar and mechanics. I do like your descriptive writing in the first section, though. Green is added ...

Alright. The grammar is quite messy, but the plot seems interesting enough. Green is added text Red is deleted text Yellow is replaced text Blue is notes "Eugene...Eugene...Eugene..." Melea kept ...

Hello! Can you review my first YWS novel "55th Floor"? The Sci-Fi category is a little misleading, it is written in the style of Fahrenheit 451 (dystopian futuristic novel). Your ...

Nice! The only comment is "Grand Anarcy" might be spelled "Grand Anarchy." Anarchy = no government; I think that is the word you want to use. The story is traveling ...

I wrote this for a contest recommended by my friend. Sorry, it's almost finished (it finishes at 11:59 PM June 30, 2010). You can give critiques of my writing style, ...

Yikes! This looks great! The story captured me as soon as it started; and, even better, there were no mechanics mistakes (that I noticed). This story is the best I've ...

It definitely is an interesting start. The plot seems interesting enough, but I warn you not to follow the way of "Clash of the Titans" and focus completely on action, ...

Overall, it is a good start. A few quoted points: “Okay, class. Your only homework is to make sure you don't die until next Monday. See you next week.” This ...

...when you snicker every time 42 shows up. ...when you celebrate Nerd Pride Day. ...when your friend knows pi to the 314th decimal. ...when you get 5th your class of ...

I will edit it as soon a my brother gets off the computer: mobile web isn't good for editing posts.

Wow! What a great ending! It definitely leaves me wanting more! 1. When I first started reading, the setting seemed to be a castle. I'm not sure if "gray" spilled ...

I like this beginning! It may be just because I like apocalyptic writing, but this seems very well-written. The times you write out "hahaha" are generally awkward. I can understand ...