SuperSquirrel

So here's the redux of "Cats Say Miao". Johnny, leaning forward in his seat, focused on the road ahead. He said, “You’re right, thank goodness it’s not a cross country ...

Johnny, leaning forward in his seat, focused on the road ahead. He said, “You’re right, thank goodness it’s not a cross country meet, or a scholastic bowl meet, or anything ...

This stuff is written for a high school short story class, and it's due tomorrow. Stuff like "ur whole story sux, rewrite it" isn't quite constructive. I'm looking for comments ...

No question this is gold. Goodness gracious. I'm in a short story class right now, and I've been reading short stories by Hemingway and Salinger for the first three weeks. ...

The illuminating sun began to rise above the remaining trees, creating crowns of light on the houses and smears of orange along the foot-tall grasses and abandoned yards. Dew on ...

This part of TWIMC is much more autobiographical than the first one (link ). It's basically a rant inspired by the girl I have a crush on and the resulting ...

Wow... Well, I do like where you're going with the story so far. It is somewhat original, and it sounds decent so far. The grammar and spelling can be improved ...

Hey, can you review ?

Ah, well first I must explain a bit. A few of my friends have had problems with depression. I tried as hard as I could to understand what they were ...

Alrighty, the new version is up at

Ramblings of a lost art student - after revision by a few YWSers. Thanks for the critiques! To Whom It May Concern: Gotta art-ify a cucumber for an assignment. It’s ...

As SmylinG inferred, this is basically the rants of an art student in the raw. It is written in the style of stream of consciousness, and it's supposed to be ...

This is a quick bit of stream of consciousness after reading The Sound and the Fury. I wrote this in about an hour after being really tired at school. Hopefully, ...

Most of this seemed alright. I prefer proofreading and spell-checking, but I believe I may be able to help you. This meant I taxed legal documents, magazines, newspapers, and various ...

October 5th came. Oregon was still cleaning its shores and waters. It didn't take long for Roberts to make his move. In a prime-time speech, Roberts announced his move of ...