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  • 55th Floor: Chapter 1

    55th Floor is a dystopian science-fiction novel in the style of Fahrenheit 451, stressing the ideas of individuality, meaningful thought, and limpathy. If you like it, please join the 55th ...

    6 min read
  • Parva

    I wrote this for a contest recommended by my friend. Sorry, it's almost finished (it finishes at 11:59 PM June 30, 2010). You can give critiques of my writing style, ...

    8 min read
  • 55th Floor: Chapter 2

    Ernest Rudolph Rawson was born on March 23, 2025 in Kinsad, Maine. A rather small community, it had officially become a town eight years earlier. Kinsad was a model communtity ...

    5 min read
  • 55th Floor: Chapter 3

    Ernie walked into his office at Cibus. Meagan, his secretary, handed him his schedule for the day."Well," Ernie remarked, "it looks like today is less busy than most.""I believe they ...

    6 min read
  • 55th Floor Chapter 4

    October 5th came. Oregon was still cleaning its shores and waters. It didn't take long for Roberts to make his move. In a prime-time speech, Roberts announced his move of ...

    5 min read
  • to whom it may concern

    This is a quick bit of stream of consciousness after reading The Sound and the Fury. I wrote this in about an hour after being really tired at school. Hopefully, ...

    4 min read
  • To Whom It May Concern version 1.2

    Ramblings of a lost art student - after revision by a few YWSers. Thanks for the critiques!To Whom It May Concern:Gotta art-ify a cucumber for an assignment. It’s a green ...

    4 min read
  • To Whom It May Concern version 2.0

    This part of TWIMC is much more autobiographical than the first one (link It's basically a rant inspired by the girl I have a crush on and the resulting "drama". ...

    5 min read
  • The Gap: Chapter One

    The illuminating sun began to rise above the remaining trees, creating crowns of light on the houses and smears of orange along the foot-tall grasses and abandoned yards. Dew on ...

    6 min read
  • Acceptance

    This stuff is written for a high school short story class, and it's due tomorrow. Stuff like "ur whole story sux, rewrite it" isn't quite constructive. I'm looking for comments ...

    8 min read
  • Cats Say Miao

    Johnny, leaning forward in his seat, focused on the road ahead. He said, “You’re right, thank goodness it’s not a cross country meet, or a scholastic bowl meet, or anything ...

    8 min read
  • Lost In There

    So here's the redux of "Cats Say Miao".Johnny, leaning forward in his seat, focused on the road ahead. He said, “You’re right, thank goodness it’s not a cross country meet, ...

    8 min read


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