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Federico took on last drag on his cigarette, threw it to the ground, and stomped it out with his foot. "Angel right? Look, I'm not like other sins. I'm not ...

Federico~Greed Federico looked at Kei and allowed himself a fake smile, "Buongiorno Kei. This is an acquittance of mine." "Name's Victoria, but you can call me Tori." "Kei." Federico reached ...

Thomas Anthony laid back in his seat with a magazine over his face half asleep. He hadn't realized that the ship had docked and almost everyone of the passengers were ...

Federico~Greed Federico opened the door to the warehouse and felt the warm air wash over him. Even though he was wearing a suit the heat didn't affect him much. He ...

(...Everyone posted while I slept...I'll post as soon as I get home from school.)

Name: Federico Delfino Age: 21 Gender: Male Human, Sin, or Angel? Sin (Greed) Description: Stands around 5'11 and weights 185 pounds. Always wheres a suit and tie or shirt and ...

I call greed! Must do paper I am avoiding...sigh.

(Hey gsppcrocks10, since both our characters are technicians, how about they be partners on the job? Just an Idea.)

Name: Giovanni Marcello Age(15-18): 17 (Year 1) Gender: Male Appearance: Stands 5'10 and weights 165lbs. Has short-cut black hair and brown eyes. Always where's a white dress shirt, black pants, ...

Wow, things is really really good. I mean, I loved it. I feel it fits more as a Narrative Poem, but it fits in either category. Now I did find ...

Name-Liam Jacob Aarons Age-25 Rank-Lieutenant/Head of Security Appearance-Stands 5'11 and weights around 195lbs. Has short brown hair and dark brown eyes. Always wears military dress. Personality-Stra

Over all I found it enjoyable. I do agree with perdido on word choice, but I don't believe you need to knock it down. I suggest combining lines. The breaks ...

Name: Thomas Anthony Francis Giovanni Age: 23 Gender: Male Occupation on the ISS: Rookie Technician/Engineer Family with you: No Appearance: Stands around 5'11. Weights roughly 180 lbs. Buzzed black h

FYI: The Euphonium is like a mini Tuba playing in the same range as a Trombone. It is more commonly know as a Baritone.

Over all I found it enjoyable, but the rhyme threw me off. Personally I don't like poetry that rhymes, but you said it was an assignment so maybe you had ...